Not every page comes off the way you envision it. With Moon Hunters issue 1 this is exemplified by this page specifically. I doubt I’ll ever be fully happy with this page.
I definitely didn’t like the first panel. The third panel felt too cramped and really should have been a much larger panel. The last two panels kind of work okay. I wasn’t thrilled with the last panel but I remember originally struggling with the thumbnails for that.
Regardless, you have to sometimes move on and just realize sometimes as long as it tells the story adequately enough you can get away with it.